from here
in the space absent of you
i have more power to give.
erased are your doubts
gone is the pressure
to be more than i am
for now i can see
that in you, you saw
a perfect soul
and it was me.
your answer to life was me
all questions answered
since the first day i came
into your heart
and i in you
you are a resonance
of my perfect heart
beating
you looked after me like a brother
a best friend.
i find now
that in letting go of something
there is a hidden treasure
to be found
in the experience.
i have found what means the most.
© r.e.l. 6/4/10
photo from Project 365 app: http://bit.ly/5G0JwQ (via Michele Kamenar)
this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 14 on Jingle Poetry
thanks so much to Jingle for this Best Poet Friend Award on Jingle Poetry
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A very beautiful poem and I love the photo that you used with it…a well crafted poem with true emotions.
thank you, again… i chose this tree as it reminds me of the special tree on Avatar
thank you, again… i chose this tree as it reminds me of the special tree on Avatar
First(?) perfect love. That was how it felt for me. Good to remember.
yes, perfect… in the heart and purity that was unleashed
Very nice…The Tree of Souls??
i’m glad you noticed 🙂 i thought it was the tree of souls too …. i see you
Gone is the pressure of first love. Beautiful.
gone is the pressure… 😉
.. but it is always a welcome experience too
“you are a resonance of my perfect heart beating”
You are a master crafter of words and imagery.
Wonderful poem.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/a-frequent-flyer-on-a-magic-carpet/
🙂 thanks for your encouragement…
YOur answer to life was me.. what a beautiful thought..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
love is powerful