if you ever feel
lost
each piece of you,
a flower petal,
thrown and left alone
on the ground
without a cause…
just remember
that you are
a forest of flowers…
© r.e.l. 10/13/11 + simsha
image by simeon schatz
Posted for Poet’s Rally 10/19-10/25/11 at The Poetry Palace
Received the Perfect Poet Award… Thank you, I accept 🙂 I nominated Sarah Johnston for next week.
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love it,
a forest of flowers make one feel more appreciated indeed.
smiles.
yes 😉
Very sweet. And truly makes the point that much of how we experience things is our own attitude or outlook. Nice job.
William
through our own eyes, yes. and we can change our viewpoint with a little help from friends and loved ones
I really liked your poem. It was left me feeling good. Thanks.
glad you enjoyed.. thanks for responding
I like forest of flowers
glad you liked it. thanks for stopping by
Crisp and sweet
thanks 🙂
cool poem tho thought it should be petals …loved the picture too thank you x
oops you’re right… I have been too spaced out to spell right hmmm usually my thing :).
Glad you enjoyed
amazing and I so like your ending thinking we are a forest of flowers
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/20/taken-from-me-on-halloween-night/
me too 🙂
we are not alone.
this is a very short and to the point poem.
but it’s good in a much bigger way.
yes, a much bigger way 😉
lovely put reminder of the wholeness no matter what we feel we shed
reminder to us all 🙂
how beautiful your message is.
smiles.
thank you.. the flowers say it all
Wonderful…Loved it….
thank you and glad you did…
I am a forest of flowers. What a great concept! Cool piece. =)
yes a great line with imagery I hold close to me..
A well earned award and a great poem to accept it with
thanks so much for your vote of confidence… 😉
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Keep up the good work! 🙂
awesome… thanks!