when i cannot
put a word
to it…
when i know it is
creeping
along inside its own
skin
when you have no idea
and float away from seeing
its polar opposite
in you
for me
© r.e.l. 7/30/11
image by simeon schatz
Posted for Poetry Potluck 7/31-8/6/11 on Jingle Poetry
my secret innuendo® 
i just loved you use d your words so you were not sure until the end.. then you go. oh yeah! perfect.
i just loved you use d your words so you were not sure until the end.. then you go. oh yeah! perfect.
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/2011/07/30/she/
thanks, luna 😉
Sweet… fits the picture well.
thanks, i agree..
Picture perfect writing. Nice!
thanks.. the moments create these words, not me 🙂
your words make it float away indeed.
well done.
my intention… glad it worked for you 🙂
beautifully expressed.
powerful moment.. thanks for your comment
Emotive, turns me over inside
wow, thanks for those thoughts…
aptly put.
🙂
thx one of my favorites
I had to read this a few times… there’s something very moving about these words.
i’m happy you enjoyed. i like to re-read it from time to time too…
very profound piece.
love the imagery.
😉
the more profound the better… 😉