i see you
only partly
and maybe later
you’ll know
the difference between
my twists
and your turns
whisper to me,
snakelike path
of wholeness…
you deserve
a view
© r.e.l. 4/15/11
image on mt. tamalpais in mill valley
**featured in All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical on redbubble
posted for Poetry Potluck 4/17-4/23/11 on Jingle Poetry
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Oh! that last stanza!
takes my breath away.
whispering always helps 🙂
Beautiful words to go with the beautiful picture.
amazing photos… view in person even better 🙂 glad you enjoyed
this could be about anything and one thing, totally AWESOME! 🙂
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/16/youre-my-reason/
many meanings, huh 😉
“snakelike path of whileness” Now isn’t that true. It’s a winding road for sure…Very vine work here. Thank you, Robin.
i think so.. glad you agree…
A path to take, across the hill, down to the sea perhaps, but a path to stir the imagination. Beautiful poem.
definitely to stir the imagination… glad it stirred yours 🙂
my turn to whisper…lovely 🙂
thank you in a whisper
Much to think about with this one. Well done.
multiple meanings 🙂 thanks
incredible!Really enjoyed this very much!
luna
awesome… 🙂
its like u were speaking to the field! 🙂 wow!
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i am 🙂 coming from the voice of someone down low in the field … of course the words could have other meanings too… glad you enjoyed
Oh, this is awesome writing. I enjoyed it immensely!
thank you.. 😉
snake like path of wholeness.. i like this! can slither both ways i mean! here’s my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/
yes, our paths are snakelike, aren’t they 🙂
the irresistable temptations of these roads…..
irresistable, yes
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