i’m used to your fervor
your passion in the moment
touching the part of me
that lingers
moving toward you…
but your attention
drifting
although lovingly
remembering
the way you used to be
before me
© r.e.l. 4/10/11
image “Golden Brown” by Mayou
posted for Poetry Potluck 4/10-4/17/11 on Jingle Poetry
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thanks for the nomination 🙂
“although lovingly
remembering
the way you used to be
before me”
big sighs
so true, huh….
Robin, its true.
I love this one.
i’m happy it resonates with you…
Truth!
My Potluck is here, by the way:
http://musingbymoonlight.com/2011/04/14/i-read-a-poem/
yes, all truth…
beautiful longing.
thank you… i really made sense at the moment..