it’s only a daydream…
if you only can see
that
you would know
the key
to what you thought
you knew
…but weren’t sure
until now
© r.e.l. 9/8/11
image by s i m s h a
Posted on Poetry Picnic 9/11-9/18/11 on Gooseberry Garden
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my secret innuendo® 
This made me think of the song, “What a Day for a Daydream”. I liked it very much. Thank you!
nice… 😉
nice 😉
Very thought provoking. Sends me in circles.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/
me too …
Brilliant poem. Short but sharp.
Here is my entry
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html
thank you … just like a real daydream
fantastic
glad you liked..
such a fantastic poem and so well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/
thx much appreciated