emptying your soul
but i know your secrets
i’m in you
the missing stone on your path
find me at the edge
near the bridge i see you on now
in the cold
you see me waiting
with your words
don’t ever change who you are
© r.e.l. 6/25/10
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**This post is for Thursday Poets Rally Week 35 (12/16-12/22/10) on Promising Poets. Received The Most Influential Poet Award. thank you 🙂
Winner of The Celebrate Poet of 2010 Award (with Promising Poets and Jingle Poetry)
Posted (partial) on Micropoetry 8/8/14 for #empty theme
56 thoughts on “unspoken”
Lovely poem…enjoyed reading it.
as usual, thanks again. it came from the heart, from a very personal space. glad you enjoyed
You had me with “I know your secrets, I’m in you” WOUCH! SWEET! I LIKE! thank you 🙂
🙂 glad it grabbed you…
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thanks, Jingle 🙂 proud to partake again
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very abstract and beautiful poem..
Thanks for sharing..
feel free to explore FRESH POETS to explore…
thank you, jingle… i will try to explore them all 🙂
but I know your secrets
I’m in you
Amazing. I like the accompanying image a lot as well. Thanks for sharing this poem.
… and it is timeless. glad you enjoyed..
Beautiful…Thank you for sharing.
thank you, glad it touched you as it did me
Lovely poem, glad to have my first visit here so pleasant! Happy Rally!
thank you… i hope you visit again 😉
Wonderful words here.. lovely indeed.. 🙂
glad it touched you.. thanks for your comments
Nice thoughts, beautiful words
Here’s my poetry
!! Happy Rally !!
thanks for visiting…
Very nice sentiment. I really enjoyed the lines “find me at the edge near the bridge I see you on now” WOW!
It left me wondering on the stones intent.
each stone is part of your path. the secret is a missing stone.
The missing stone on your path, find me at the edge…The parts needed to be complete are you. I like it.
my favorite part too 🙂
loved the lines..i am in you, i know your secrets…
yes, it’s true 🙂
Beautifully written 🙂
Lovely piece to be dedicated to the one and only in a person’s life. Beautifully penned 🙂
..thank you 🙂
thanks for stopping by
This grabbed me… especially the words… I’m in you… I have experienced that once and I know how that feels… loved it, intense and very personal… m glad you shared:-)
you’re welcome.. even though unspoken, i had to get the words out.. glad it touched you.
like it, short and sweet
thanks, sometimes the less words are better
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i’m done now… just finished up.
i am happily writing today 🙂 happy saturday to you too, jingle
Love Your Poem and Like The Picture of The Bridge – It Speaks Volumes 🙂
a special bridge, yes.. it reminds of the bridge across forever (the book by Richard Bach).
thanks for you comments
love the ending. thanks for sharing.
thanks… yes, how important it is to feel that we are loved for being exactly who we are 🙂
rich poetry..I;ll see your blog often..and ncce picture too..it enhances your poems
thank you for coming by so often. i try to fit the pictures to the words to the overall artistic theme… glad you enjoy ..
Lovely poem. 🙂 My favourite line is: the missing stone on your path/find me at the edge. A lover is like a missing puzzle piece when they’re gone.
yes, they are… and we are willing to go the edge
thanks for your comment
That poem was short but beautiful. Loved the rhythm and tone. Wonderful.
thank you. every word speaks a thousand words in it 🙂
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thanks for the award nominations, jingle for The Celebrate Poet of 2010 Award… 🙂 i honor each and every one of them…
so very touching. and the picture also fit the imagery as well
thanks… yea it’s the “bridge across forever” 🙂
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