to fill every gap
with each perfect
complement
knowing
you truly
to be full
of cells
immersed
in your deep
as the covers of me
of time
left
basking
purely invisible
© r.e.l. 3/31/11
image “mountaintree5” by simsha
inspired by kundalini energy, induced by hatha yoga
posted for The Thursday Post on Ethereal Heights
Posted for Poetry Potluck 4/3-4/9/11 on Jingle Poetry
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stunning imagery.
A++
thanks, jingle… for me too in my head
ooo i loved the depth and flow!
definite depth flowing ….
I’m going to echo other commenters on the flow. The second line sets up the rhythm of “fill every gap” and then the words succeeding just pour down and in to do just that.
i like that idea… of it pouring down like water. i wrote it about energy rising up.. i love when more than one meaning is conveyed