what is your wish?
why don’t you tell it to me
now…
so i can keep it safe in the place
where the trees know
your name
and why not tell me too
if you are for real
in a place where i am you
and you are me
did i tell you yet that you are my wish?
© r.e.l. 3/30/11
image of my wishng tree…
Posted for Poetry Potluck 4/3-4/9/11 on Jingle Poetry
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huh.
this is a very beautiful poem.
its interesting!
thank you.. it speaks, huh 😉
Quite mysterious, and an enjoyable read. Well written!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/04/moments/
thank you… means a lot to me..
fun word play…
love the flow.
A++
it’s a true wish…
interesting wish robin.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/remain/
coming true…