how is the fire in you
the fire in me
at times when i least
expect it to be?
when your steam, your inferno
in a moment i blaze…
and you know the truth
created your moment
for me or not
© r.e.l. 5/9/11
Posted on Micropoetry
Featured in All Out Emotion on redbubble
Posted on Poetry Potluck 5/22-5/28/11 on Jingle Poetry
20 thoughts on “the fire in you”
Quiet in all its passion. Brings out the mystery that intensifies it all.Beautifully put!
there is a lot in the mystery, yes.. thanks for your comments
these beautiful mysteries make life worth living.
fabulous poem robin. your poems are magic.
i agree… these moments are all what life is about
Added, I enjoy your site! 🙂
A magical poem.
thank you… no matter what fire stands for, it has a beauty to it.. glad you enjoyed
i love this one too… writing it made me feel better
Inner fire is contagious! Yes – it was quite mysterious too! Here is mine: http://jaanpehchaan.wordpress.com/2011/05/22/no-pain-no-gain/
it spreads like wild fire 😉
your words are powerful,
very enlightening piece.
fire is powerful… thanks for visiting
You are really good at projecting emotion through your poetry, lovely
thank you.. the elements speak
Stellar yet in an earthen tone – fantastic write!
thanks… love your comment
And the fire burns bright. Loved your write!
glad you did. thanks for visiting
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