between spaces of time, misty

between spaces of time, misty
you start to believe
that you always have time
like a river

a precious you
is waiting to notice
in this moment
saved for you

see through
what follows you home
to be your pillow…
a winding path
on a daydream
leads to your smile

it’s already for you
to hear,
so listen to its whisper
you are beautiful

© r.e.l. 9/22/11

image of yoga robin™

by s i m s h a

Posted for Thursday Poets Rally 9/21-9/27/11 on Poetry Palace

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19 thoughts on “between spaces of time, misty

  1. Lovely, yes, Beautiful, indeed, worth stating more than that, always. Your overall topic and lead up to it was indeed grand the flow remained steady and the ending was pure. It drew you in to this moment and brought life to the reader. A rare talent and well executed congrats on this wonderful piece and thanks for sharing.

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