between spaces of time, misty
you start to believe
that you always have time
like a river
a precious you
is waiting to notice
in this moment
saved for you
what follows you home
to be your pillow…
a winding path
on a daydream
leads to your smile
it’s already for you
so listen to its whisper
you are beautiful
© r.e.l. 9/22/11
image of yoga robin™
by s i m s h a
Posted for Thursday Poets Rally 9/21-9/27/11 on Poetry Palace
19 thoughts on “between spaces of time, misty”
this is beautiful…
love the path your words trace and lead to.
i love it too… glad you agree. i’m in a fascinating place in my mind 😉
I´ve heard that whisper before… and it is a magnific sensation.
Thanks for sharing! Lovely picture.
it sure is magical… the photo is epic (as was the evening shooting it)
thank you for all your support…
thank you @smoothsongssoft for your comment today, “Between Spaces is my favorite one so far!” it means a lot to me 😉
wow, what a dreamy one, thanks for the treat.
you’re welcome.. my pleasure
Oh wow… this is so sweet! I know you didn’t write this for me (… did you?) but I’m blushing anyway…
🙂 maybe i did …
Yep. Beautiful. Nothing more to say about this one.
thank you.. it makes me smile
So true. Honesty and eveyrtihng recognized.
Lovely, yes, Beautiful, indeed, worth stating more than that, always. Your overall topic and lead up to it was indeed grand the flow remained steady and the ending was pure. It drew you in to this moment and brought life to the reader. A rare talent and well executed congrats on this wonderful piece and thanks for sharing.
your comment made my day.. the way my words touched you
amazing poem robin. fabulous. just loved the beauty and flow of the poem.
thank you.. i spent many days on this one, as opposed to one sitting like i usually do. it unfolded in many magical moments..