with a whisper
you share so much
i know you knew…
the swirl of your thoughts
your eyes
looking into
the day i knew
but once forgot
thank you for never stopping
our moment
that you knew
i felt.
© r.e.l. 11/9/11
image by simeon schatz
Posted for Poetry Picnic 11/13-11/19/11 on Gooseberry Garden
that moment should never stop, but it will always live in memories
it never stops….
amazing.
🙂
I’m glad you enjoyed
Very nice. Well done!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/13/another-nights-dream-3/
thx for your support
I felt this yesterday. there was a moment just like this. and you seem to have put it into words. *bizzare*
synchronicity… 🙂
so happy about that one…. 😉
lovely poem… 🙂
thx
love the imagery of this.
smiles.
🙂
happy you enjoy
just beautiful 🙂 living the moment
yes, i’m in love.
“The swirl of your thoughts”, is a wonderfully vivid line
yes, my thoughts definitely swirl around.. so fast it’s hard to capture