i transmitted
my thoughts to you
just now …
eyes at sunset
never stop penetrating
the everlasting moment …
just bow your head and be silent
© r.e.l. 5/19/12
Posted for Poetry Picnic 5/20-5/27/12
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I like this poem very much!
Expecially the last line…although On the first read the meaning of it was way different than on the second 🙂
Wander
glad to hear… each reading can be different 😉
Rombout Vercnocke @boutman
boutman Rombout Vercnocke
+++ I bow in silence… > a beauty, Robin 🙂 RT @wisdombyrobin: just now wp.me/pVkY5-SO #poetry #micropoetry #poem
thanks, @boutman. i bow too.
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Sybille Sterkabout 5 hours ago
Lovely.
😉 thanks
– robinellenlucas
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kappisanabout 5 hours ago
Love it!:D
thanks for your support…
– robinellenlucas
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Paul Hicksonabout 3 hours ago
aww beautiful piece!
thank you, i wrote it just now 😉
– robinellenlucas
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kenroomeabout 1 hour ago
Your poems are as prayers that clear the way into beauty.
😉 thank you
– robinellenlucas
Very well expressed. Like the ending.
thanks, me too ….
beautiful …close intimate relationships seem to exude this …thank you for sharing
you’re welcome… 😉
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sure2010about 11 hours ago
great communication to reach instant
yes it only takes an instant 🙂
thanks @ThePoetryTree for the feature in your newsletter The HUSH! is out! http://bit.ly/s6hbXU
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TheWanderingBoo2 days ago
beautiful