your layers
exude
your form, solidified
a story of strength
untold
awaits
the test of time…
rolling
seeking
its mastery
within
as its mystery
hardens…
softens…
then floats
you carved me, you know
valleys breathing now
thank you
stay with me, you say
i can feel you breathe
© r.e.l. 6/1/12
image by s i m s h a
posted for Poetry Picnic 6/3-6/10/12 on Jingle Poetry
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sure201034 minutes ago
valleys breathing now..what a beauty of imagination…Robin…your love feel & expression are just awesome..:O)
thank you as usual. the words just flowed… 😉
-robin
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George Lenz10 minutes ago
well done
nice to hear from you.
i will check out some of your artwork soon 😉
-robin
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mushroomheadabout 2 hours ago
your writing is really beautiful.
love this part;
stay with me, you say
i can feel you breathe
nice work :]
thanks for the compliement 😉 that part felt really good to me too …
-robin
Excellent piece. I love the way you feel the spirit within.
definitely layers of spirit on this one 🙂