as if i’ll know
hear me
as if you feel
who i am…
as if you’re about
to melt
but don’t know how
as if you are the only person
who i’m speaking
to now
as if these words
mean something
maybe the world
to you
as if i’ll know
your heart is
beating faster
as if
your wish
just came true
© r.e.l. 1/7/12
image by s i m s h a
Posted for Thursday Poet’s Rally 1/12-/18/12 on Promising Poet’s Parking Lot
Recited live for Jonathan Montaldo poetry event at CIIS 2/28/12
Beautiful, Robin.
January 8, 2012 at 3:08 am
nice to hear from you again, blake… always a pleasure.. thanks for commenting
January 11, 2012 at 6:41 am
Nice work.
January 11, 2012 at 10:38 am
thanks, come back again soon…
January 11, 2012 at 11:02 pm
ah a silky smooth feel to this one – “as if you’re about
to melt
but don’t know how” – nicely done, swinging by from Poetry Palace
January 11, 2012 at 11:57 am
a beautiful feeling to melt while reading something touching
January 11, 2012 at 11:03 pm
I definitely here you, Chilling.
http://mrblaque78.wordpress.com/2012/01/11/discarded-without-hopes/
January 11, 2012 at 2:44 pm
glad to hear it…
January 11, 2012 at 11:07 pm
I hear you, powerful expressions.
January 11, 2012 at 4:48 pm
thanks, and yes they were to me too
January 11, 2012 at 11:09 pm
I get so excited when I come across a blog I have never visited and then to find that it contains such beautiful poetry for me to ponder
Sighhhhh ♥ You have a new fan! Both here, Twitter and your FB page, I am now following! Hope you will follow back! Here is my page:
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January 11, 2012 at 7:17 pm
wow, thank you. welcome… thanks for your support
January 11, 2012 at 11:12 pm
yes, as if your wish came true, exactly
January 11, 2012 at 7:45 pm
mine did
January 11, 2012 at 11:27 pm
You leave beautiful words
for us to feel
thank you
http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/you-wish-me.html
Wander
January 11, 2012 at 10:52 pm
you’re welcome.. feels beautiful to leave them too.. thanks for visiting
January 11, 2012 at 11:29 pm
You leave beautiful words
for us to feel
Thank you
http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/you-wish-me.html
Wander
January 11, 2012 at 10:58 pm
February 10, 2012 at 4:01 pm
Neat and concise. Very smartly put. Enjoyed reading it and loved the bit
“as if you are the only person
who i’m speaking
to now”
January 12, 2012 at 1:02 am
wonderful, thanks for your comment… i like to speak to the reader as if one-on-one. glad you felt it
January 13, 2012 at 11:32 am
Your poem is beautiful AS IF written from heart..
January 12, 2012 at 1:26 am
it is written from the heart
January 13, 2012 at 11:50 am
So glad your wish came true.
Be careful what you ask for because they do.
Nice one.
January 12, 2012 at 1:31 am
yes, i know… thanks for stopping by
January 13, 2012 at 11:52 am
Beautiful words.
Its lovely Robin, ..really lovely.
January 12, 2012 at 3:05 am
thank you. a great release to get it out into words..
January 13, 2012 at 11:54 am
There is a nice feel about your poem!
Happy rally!
January 12, 2012 at 8:56 am
You can read mine at http://periwinkler.wordpress.com/2012/01/12/the-visit-to-a-dear-one/
January 12, 2012 at 8:58 am
viewing it now…
January 13, 2012 at 11:56 am
thank you, i feel it too
January 13, 2012 at 11:56 am
As if..seems like it had a lot of pondering between the lines..Nice piece!
Afixxion Addixt-The enigma
January 12, 2012 at 8:00 pm
thanks for that comment. sometimes the repetition does that, doesn’t it. i like to create natural pauses for reflection. glad you felt it.
January 13, 2012 at 11:59 am
beautiful assumptions and following up,
cheers.
January 13, 2012 at 4:35 pm
thx
January 16, 2012 at 1:06 pm
thanks, @unknowncivilian Unknown Civilian, for your mention in the The #unknown Daily bit.ly/pHXCHq ▸ Top stories today via @wisdombyrobin
glad you enjoyed my poem
January 13, 2012 at 6:38 pm
Beautiful piece, thanks for taking the time to share it with us
January 15, 2012 at 10:02 am
my pleasure.. glad you enjoyed
January 16, 2012 at 1:04 pm
Gorgeous.
January 16, 2012 at 9:22 am
thanks for stopping by …;)
February 10, 2012 at 4:02 pm
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January 29, 2012 at 6:41 pm
great, visit again soon…
February 10, 2012 at 4:00 pm
This was so beautiful!!! The picture captured the visual and your words captured my heart!
~L
February 10, 2012 at 3:48 pm
i’m happy to hear that… have a nice weekend
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