you brought me up
from the shadows
a mystery of parts
a voice heard only
by the ground
balanced on me
in your way you
could see what others did not
within the cells behind parts
© r.e.l. 3/11/11
posted on Poetry Potluck-3/13-3/19/11 for Jingle Poetry
12 thoughts on “within cells behind parts”
The dreamer within the dream,
the wide awake
beyond all we can dream,
the eyes of beauty
that roam through unseen beauty,
balancing out the shadows and light.. thanks, blake 😉
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Wow cool thank you! You are so sweet . I will promptly put it up on my site as soon as my new Mac is done loading 😉
he saw you through the eyes of love-thats why he could see all of you.
my guess Is because of love. ? ? ?
I really it.
Love is magical…
that’s very lovely delivery of your message.
all about balance in life..
oh my goodness.
this is amazing.
“a mystery of parts
thats my favorite line, but the whole poem is gorgeous.
yes, i went inside on this one to describe it ….. glad it touched you