will i last?

you changed my life
as i went numb
waking with your lightning storm
inside in my dream
your fire, outside
of me…

i wondered, silently,
will i last through this next moment
in your presence?

drawn to you, still
forever in my memory

© r.e.l. 3/13/11

image “stormyard3” – a lightning storm

posted on Poetry Potluck-3/13-3/19/11 for Jingle Poetry

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14 thoughts on “will i last?

  1. torn between present and past. if possible we should let past go completely when we have a promising future in front of us.

    i can feel this tug within myself quite often too.

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