
you can go
to the meadow
whenever you want
i’m always there.
you can move together with me
feeling our breeze
sharing the same space
that created us
from one heart to another.
i can feel you touching my face now
as you float to me in a mist
reaching the same space
our mystery…
our meadow…
© r.e.l. 2/10/09
photo by Michele Kamenar
posted for Poetry Potluck 5/8-5/14/11 on Jingle Poetry
hmmmmmm…..,
i can feel the breeze…
it’s so beautiful..!!
thank you 🙂 i am happy to have created a vision for you…
thank you 🙂 i am happy to have created a vision for you…
This is lovely. I am deeply touched.
it was a fine moment where i was thinking of the meadow imagery and the poem i wrote last year, and then you posted the perfect picture, michele. 🙂
it was a fine moment where i was thinking of the meadow imagery and the poem i wrote last year, and then you posted the perfect picture, michele. 🙂
This is very sensory.Loved it,the meadow, the breeze,the touch on the face……lovely!
i loved it too..
Lovely =)
thanks loved this place myself
perfect job..
A++
I loved this meadow
What a wonderful place this must be! Thanks for allowing us to visit it with your sweet lines. 🙂
you’re welcome 😉
Great imagery. Feelings well conveyed.
couldn’t go wrong with the scenery
a beautiful BEAUTIFUL romantic piece 🙂
thank you… i’m glad you were touched