don’t get me wrong
please don’t
but your energy scares me…
in a way that finding something lost does, long forgotten
it wants me to see
that maybe
somehow
you are the person i have been searching for
although a mirror to see myself
in the same moment…
but isn’t it true
that we all search for the person
who can allow us
to get closer to ourselves?
you seem anxious about the words
you use
as if they make a difference
as if you don’t know that it’s the energy
behind them
that decides.
i observe you silently
and i know you
please let me continue
© r.e.l. 11/12/10
Posted for Poetry Potluck week 18 (1/16-1/22/11) Languages, Signs and Symbols on Jingle Poetry
I’m not sure if this is beautiful or creepy. Lol. I’ll take beautiful cuz I’m an optimist.
Thanks for your powerful words.
both 🙂 that energy is what created it.. but either way, beautiful.
back again, love it even more. it’s so honest. thanks robin. you’re so talented.
thanks, heather… i appreciate all your support.. going over to visit you now 🙂
what a powerful message, best wishes.
A+
thank you… 😉
I’ll take beautiful, too. And in response to the question
“but isn’t it true
that we all search for the person
who can allow us
to get closer to ourselves?” – my answer is yes. It’s true for me.
I love this!
thank you … 🙂 yes, it is true… so we can see our beauty (and pain) in ways we cannot look at within ourselves. glad to get your comments ….
Your own depth, perception and choice of words suggest a better understanding of what your real needs are in a relationship. Happy Trails!
your thoughts are much appreciated…