idea what you
are doing to me now
inside… how you watch me
with your future eyes that penetrate
the air between us… i realize that i describe
a moment that hasn’t happened yet
but still, somehow i find
© r.e.l. 12/8/10
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this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 14 on Jingle Poetry
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10 thoughts on “the air between”
The imagery you associate with your poem reminds me of the idea that “we are all star stuff.” It is wonderfully put in this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XGK84Poeynk .
Thanks! And thanks for visiting the other day.
thank you for this video! yes, we are made of stars… 🙂 the imagery of being far away yet close is close to my heart.
Very fascinating and thought-provoking poem. Really enjoyed it.
Mine are here http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/hobbies-passions-pastimes-entertainment/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/i-am/
thank you.. yes, it’s a mystery
thank you 🙂 true feeling
We are part of each other. And in special cases, when love enters in, we are more than we were. Thanks for sharing.
yes, when we connect, we become a part of each other.. thanks for visiting
Your writing takes my breath away.
.. i am happy it touched you 🙂