you see me
you see into me
you sit with me
and feel into me
you know i look to you
to see myself
and in you
i see
a place that needs to heal
i see yearning
and a need to bond
with another
who can feel deeply
into you
someone who gives
all of herself, not part
when she feels
i’ll let you into me
when i feel you
looking into me
knowing me
breathing me
© r.e.l. 3/21/08
(almost 3 years ago… and the feeling is still current)
this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 14 on Jingle Poetry
thanks so much to Jingle for this Most Blessed Blogger Award on Jingle Poetry
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Robin Robin; Robin
what can I say that you have already said.
What can I feel that haven’t already felt.
Some souls befriend for ever
Thank you
FS
thank you, kindred spirit.. it says it all.
your words are touching.
Exactly how I feel today about a friend, very profound and beautiful Robin…
glad you can relate, karen 🙂 this one gives me a good feeling too… (i wrote it awhile ago).
… and i’ve been listening to your pink floyd song all morning. cool vibe, especially the beginning
I like the picture.
seemed fitting for the words.. thanks for visiting
Such a beautiful heartfelt poem, and I’m glad the feelings are the same!
Mine are here http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/hobbies-passions-pastimes-entertainment/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/i-am/
me too.. some things never change over time
A beautiful poem. Feelings last a long time, never have to be completely understood. They just are what they are when from the heart.
yes, i agree. they are what they are..
amazing flow.
lovely job!
A+
thanks, jingle
A fine expression of a relationship that is obviously working. Good job on both points, Robin.
the perfect relationship
That’s some really intense emotion expressed so well.
yes, and real. thanks for your comments..
Love this one too. Beautiful.
glad you got to read it .. 😉
Ah!!! So beautiful and soft.. I enjoyed reading this..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
thank you… i’m glad the words flow for you too 🙂
Beautiful timeless feeling .. liked it so much…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
timeless, yes… thanks for your comment
Your poetry and pictures take my breath away!
Thanks for visiting my blog as it helped me find you! hugs pat
glad to hear… that’s my hope that others will feel it too 🙂 nice to meet you too ….
This is beautiful. I loved “I see / a place that needs to heal”
Thank you for stopping by by blog.
thank you… so you can see it too. the mirror. glad to get your comments…