he wants

he barely scratches the surface when he knows
that he wants her
to take something from him

just what… is elusive
but does it matter to you?

take the last bit
maybe more
it is the least i can offer
to you

for, in this moment
this unique instant
my heart beats against the wind

© r.e.l. 12/24/10

inspired by D. H. Lawrence

**this post is for Poetry Potluck Week 16 on Jingle Poetry

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Received The Most Creative Blogger Award from Jingle Poetry

 


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8 thoughts on “he wants

  1. heart beats against the wind?
    lovely line..
    your work is very well fine tuned..
    keep it up…

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