as soon as i think i know
then i remember
that i don’t…
you’re already there
don’t forget
who you are
i won’t turn anything on
or off
can i just be me?
can’t you try to keep your soul
and fill your heart
but not take mine?
you mean let the ground speak
through my feet?
you’re irresistible to me
in ways that i cannot tell
find a way
to show me
© r.e.l. 2/8/11
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posted for Poetry Potluck week 22 on Jingle Poetry
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just beautiful. its so fragile and tender that it straight goes and captures the heart.
glad you liked… 😉
I really like this, nice image too.
thanks, glad you can relate 🙂
Robin, this is so unique. I’m not sure how to relate yet, so many people in so many different places. But I do sense something very deep and authentic… and courageous in you. To allow the deep soul to sing out this longing for it’s other… for the divine/human encounter and intertwine is amazing.
In the end won’t we sing…
Ah… my love, we have traveled such a long ways for this kiss.
Love to you,
Blake
you are sweet, blake… so many people 🙂 (you mean voices in this poem? it’s actually only two.. a little dialog). but i’m sure many people who read this are in different places too 🙂
very authentic…. like a channeled script….
always enjoy your thoughtful comments ….
“you mean let the ground speak
through my feet?”
I loved the whole poem, but that line especially…
i love being barefooted and can feel my emotions through them… 😉
Not only do you feel with your feet, you feel with your heart. “Find a way to show me” is tender and deep. Well written!
my heart is in my feet 😉
I love how your heart speaks and bring out the depths.
🙂
it speaks to me… 😉
U never fail to amaze ne, with ur winderful work…
😉 thanks again 😉 i’m happy to inspire…
#me
lovely,
sorry for the delay,
when you link your entry in, remove http://www part from your link before you submit, then your entries will not be stuck …
Thanks for the attention.
A++
thanks, jingle 🙂
by the way, i don’t have www in my url so not sure how it got there but i’ll double check next time. thanks for heads up 🙂