i haven’t
written
yet
or
spoken much
since the last time
i found
the way
to your
place inside you
that you protect
© r.e.l. 5/4/11
posted for Thursday Poet’s Rally 5/5-5/11/11 on Jingle Poetry
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my secret innuendo® 
sometimes words vanish when we reach our goal.
. . . a nice way to put it. thanks as usual
seems like you are taking a loooooooooooooong break.
have fun.
i’ll be back soon.. don’t worry. speechlessness in a protected territory (as one person commented 🙂 is a precious thing
Thoughtful and nice
nice to find the words ..
Very interesting! I suppose you are puzzled… I really enjoyed the read.
not anymore 😉
Good theme, like the brevity.
me too and thanks…
stunning, well done.
thanks, jingle…
Well said, just as it is. 🙂
thank you.. i thought it was perfect as is too…
I like it. Short, but to the point.
to the right point 🙂
right to the point
a simple and pure thought
I like that I understand where you take this poem, but I also enjoy that the words leave it open enough for me to read more into it. Kudos!
glad you feel the space i created..
I know this specifically.
sigh.
and the scroll is still blank ;( maybe taking a break inside me.. (the right brain).
waiting eagerly for your next poem.
love.
in a silent space now.. but it will come, don’t worry
This is elegantly beautiful! There’s a silent joy that your words speak of. Maybe the triumph of being allowed to enter protected territory has left you speechless. (Am I reading this correctly?)
i wasn’t quite sure but you are so right. i am triumphing silently.. in this speechless time. thanks so much for clearing that up for me..
simple but nice. I like the rhythm.
sure… my pleasure. i need to get the words flowing again…
So simple yet so meaningful. Love it
thanks, simplicity works best sometimes
Wow,, That is awesome!!
thanks, sometimes those silent moments create words. my favorite part
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thanks for the nomination… it’s such a pleasure to be a part of this poetry community
Pretty nice post. I just stumbled upon your blog and wanted to say that I have really enjoyed browsing your blog posts. In any case I’ll be subscribing to your feed and I hope you write again soon!
great… come back again soon
really like this one… so much said with so few poetic words.
lovely… nice visiting you.
glad you enjoyed… even during a time where my voice seems stifled, it still came through 😉