you
feel trapped
inside the cells of
secrets known
=
it’s simple though
out here
=
so, shhh
listen for my pause
[…]
and you’ll see
the way
© r.e.l. 8/30/11
image nightleaf
Posted to Poetry Picnic 9/4-9/10/11 on Gooseberry Garden
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my secret innuendo® 
I love this!!!!! […] shh… The pause!!!! Love love that
thanks, me too, i just said “shh…” to myself 🙂
Nice Post!
thanks, visit again soon 🙂
beautiful robin.
that you.. […]
It reads like a call to silence of the mind, peace, somehow…maybe I am wrong.
Happy garden day! http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/as-it-was/
yes, peace of mind and calming all the chaos that creates trauma inside. all the answers are inside if you just take the chance to listen.
very apt words.
thanks, 😉
shh- thats nicely placed! here’s my entry: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/a-roar-to-mankind/
thanks, i think that’s my favorite part of the poem too…
So wonderful I love your poem
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/
thank you, me too. i’m listening to it right now 😉
Wonderful writing. Yes: listen to my pause — a great line!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/blood-on-the-moon-2/
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😉
Well done, Robin! Loved it. Blessings, Terri
thx 😉
Great Work of Creativity!
thanks, i appreciate your comments…
Secrets in the moments of silence.
Nice work! … Appreciate the sentiment.
definitely.. you can only hear them in silence
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