if you were here now
looking into me
i would tell you about my heart
and its secret wish i promised
to notice that
i am inside you
and now
i figured out a way
to not miss you too much
© r.e.l. 2/3/15
submitted to Thursday Poets Rally week 80 on Hype Park Poetry Palace on 2/14/15
smart ending or good result.
profound verse.
thank you 🙂
staying inside of your lover is cool.
definitely 🙂
your words are attempting.
powerful love.
thanks, 😉
having a secret is cool….
good luck.
it sure is
this is sweet….
thank you, and it works
a pure focus of love, powerful metaphor and enthusiasm, well done.
i love metaphor
Wow, i feel kind of left out. Everyone who has commented on this post so far has 5 names. I didn’t know it was so common.