do you know
that mixed in you
is magic
born out of
that which captured
your soul
and you abandoned
and you will find
your way
when you
truly are you
in this moment
and can
rise above?
© r.e.l. 5/6/10
posted for Poetry Potluck 6/19-6/25/11 Void, Loneliness & Sorrow on Jingle Poetry
Ahh… the magic and the rising that happens… and the sorrow of struggle till the moment of rising above comes… beautiful…
thank you… i enjoyed rereading this one that i wrote last year too…
I couldn’t agree more, beautiful wisdom
a nice thought…
This poem captivated me. Thank you for sharing. Great poem!
Miki
http://mikspoems.wordpress.com/2011/06/20/amessageforme/
glad you enjoyed.. .i’m captivated now reading it a year later. i’m glad about this theme this week so that i could revisit it..
So true…being in the moment!
yes!
i had to reread it three times. its so strong in a way. loved it!
you gotta love runon sentences…;)