can i face you, ghost
and know everything
that what isn’t said
could be
but is masked instead in a mist…
its chosen way
lose yourself
in me
when you feel you see me
but don’t
a side of me, you follow
gone like mist, maybe sleeping
eyes lost
given
proudly to you
and for you
© r.e.l. 3/15/11
this poem inspired uncleblack to compose a song ‘ghost’ using these lyrics… posted on bandcamp (the katie winter).
thank you! 🙂
posted for Poetry Potluck 3/27-4/2 on Jingle Poetry
featured in Feminine Intent on redbubble
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Beautiful, Robin. So much open space in you that comes through, creating open spaces in your words for Presence to steam through.
Thank you.
yes… 😉 thank, blake
“when you feel you see me
but don’t”, poetically written with delicate lyrical words
Tremendous image
Thanks for sharing and look forward to more of your written words.
a misty ocean ghost, not to be feared.. why do most ghost images that people make have to be scary-looking?
A beautiful verse with a sigh of mystery..Loved it.
thank you…. that was my angle to portray this. glad you felt it 😉
wonderful…..
thanks …;)
There is a sense of serenity as I read your poem. A most excellent write.
so true for me… thanks, david.. glad you enjoyed
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