if only for a second
….blow the dust
……..from your mind
…………the sands of time
…………….and follow me…
did you think
this act would….
tingle your spine?……..
restrict the narrow…………
spaces that you call ‘you‘?…………….
what if this place
….your perfect harmony
……..touches the rest,
…………always essence
…………….never hindering?
your
blood….
flowing……..
just holding lightly…………
© r.e.l. 6/25/11
submitted to caesura 2/5/14
image by simsha
Posted for Poetry Potluck 6/26-7/2/11 on Jingle Poetry
Featured in Feminine Intent on redbubble
Featured in All Out Emotion on redbubble
Interesting poem. Love the imagery and word flow. Also like the pattern of your poem and photo is wonderful….Well done.
glad you enjoyed.. thanks for your kind words
I believe you talk about yoga… I could perfectly follow your experience!
yes, yoga is a way of life.. i also speak in a spiritual and psychological sense.. glad you enjoyed
Your imagery is wonderful, enhanced by the layout of your prose too. Powerful, yet gentle in its mood. Lovely!
thanks, i agree that the photo by simeon schatz says a lot about the vibe of the photo. i love pairing my words with his images. glad you enjoyed..
Both the form and content contribute to this strong, wise piece.
thanks, kim… matching content with the words is a true art that we are loving… glad you enjoyed
you have such great talent. just wanted to say that.
Luna
thanks, luna.. means a lot coming from you.
beautiful.
🙂
love the imagery so very much.
thanks, yea, me too…
woah- hoah!!! this is beautiful! Very touching! (and I just love your blog lay-out) 🙂
thanks, i work hard on the layout of the entire blog. and it touched me to write it so glad it touched you too
gee I liked it
awesome, thanks
thanks, @johnmildinhall for featuring this in your daily Empirical Creative twitter newsletter 🙂 glad you enjoyed and thanks for passing around…
http://paper.li/johnmildinhall/1308310984
thanks, @quippdPsych for passing along this poem in twitter. glad you enjoyed
Serene piece…thanks for sharing it.
any time
I enjoyed the unique formatting! Perfect to flow with your words!
thank you.. the format does lend itself (along with the image) to a new way of seeing and feeling words..
awesome!
it’s becoming one of my favorite… that you and everyone enjoys. i think the photo makes it too!
Ive missed your words.
Im sorry…
you make me feel so positive, like floating on bubbles.
I’ll try not to disappear for so long next time… Thanks for your support and mostly I’m glad to find a kindred spirit…
I meant I had not been visiting!
Fellow bubble floater 🙂
yes, fellow bubble floater 😉
thank you, victor @stran9ee, for including my poem in your daily feature newsletter on twitter, http://paper.li/stran9ee/1289976354
thank you, red bubble community for features in Feminine Intent and All Out Emotion… much appreciated… 😉
Another amazing poem Robin, I love the form too
it was a moving creative process to put this together..
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