it was the moment when
i k n e w
that i was
more…
than i thought
before
this moment
© r.e.l. 8/24/11
image skyee
Posted for Thursday Poets Rally 8/25-8/31/11 on Promising Poets’ Poetry Cafe
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Simple and sweet!!! Great job.
thanks, i’m into simple lately… so much can be said with well chosen words… 😉
full circle to find the truth…
yea 😉
more than before….excellent words that mean so much although fill little space!
so much more 😉
thanks, @thephotoroll for including my poem in your daily Twitter newsletter http://paper.li/thephotoroll/1313193230. Much appreciated…
If only we realize that every new moment, life would be so much better! 🙂
My Rally – Patiently Trying
so true 😉
Love the simplicity yet what a revelation!
such a revelation .. turning point
simple and direct, well done.
😉
thanks, my pleasure… thanks for visiting
Astute and consise. Great job.
thank you, much appreciated
If only we DID realise how much more we are now than we were before. Brilliant!
definitely….
Though Simple .. but Amazingly written ..
Impressive
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
some of my Haiku Collections
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/
and also, on my very recent Work as well
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/
!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!
thank you 😉
(thanks for all the links… will check out)
Yes! I like this a lot 🙂
thank.. me too 🙂
I find there is deeper meaning in fewer words…this is one good example!
Very succinct. Is this some short form of ten syllable poem?
hi… just free form verse. glad you enjoyed…
The more I read this, the more I feel that this poem is like a cycle. Every moment is the moment that we are more than before: so inspiring. 🙂
Happy rally. 🙂
http://dhitermination.wordpress.com/2011/08/20/morning-is-a-bliss/
i agree too. .. you can say so much with words and a perfect photo to go with it. thanks for visiting….
Simple, yet marks a new direction. Well Put.
http://ankokuhikaru.wordpress.com/2011/07/01/poetry-rose-masquerade/
definitely… and some hope on the new path
Simply put but powerfully ponderous.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/09/01/ive-got-you/
wisely said.