i yearn for
the touch
of your river
flowing toward me…
as the river settles
to the ocean
i am the mix
of me, your warrior
of you, my wave…
© r.e.l. 3/23/11
inspired by the Bhagavad Gita and the Osa peninsula of Costa Rica
posted for Thursday Poets Rally week 40 on Promising Poets
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beautiful touch of something flowing…
definitely
magical word painting..
Thanks for sharing.
thanks, jingle… i have a magical yoga surfing retreat in costa rica…; )
i love the feel of this poem’s rhythm… very fitting to the tone.
thanks, me too 😉
Oye! Its brilliant! The ending is so heavy!!! 🙂
an ending with many meanings 😉
love the flow 🙂
flowing like a river 😉
like lovers, the ocean and the river, and us at the intersection 🙂 inspiring..
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exactly….
I was caught up in the imagery and emotion.
Well done!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/28/when-will-i-know/
awesome… that’s what i’m aiming for 😉
Beautiful imagery.
glad you felt it…
yeah! I get that one, an endless state of yearning 😦
Enjoy the rally!
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actually, for me, this poem is not about painful yearning… but of an ever-flowing state that you can always tap into. 😉
Oh my, this is absolutely fascinating, Robin. I’m quite mesmerised. Energy just pours out of this verse. Thanks for sharing.
thanks, yelena.. you are sweet. i was definitely in a perfect zone to let the words flow….
Beautiful words! So liberating- intensively spiritual..
Hugs xx
liberating for me too 🙂
beautiful…
thanks much, as usual 😉
Weird i found that very errotic. it could just be my mood. beautiful, thank you
it could be read that way too 😉
I love this. Short and vivid. You captured emotion in very few words.
thanks… yes, i meditate on it for awhile until just the most important words arise 😉
beautiful in its simplicity. thank you.
rivers are a simple thing. thanks for your comment 😉
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see you soon?
Luna
definitely
it would be perfect if you reminded me…. i live in a different kind of timezone 😉
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That’s gorgeous. And *sexy*.
nice interpretation… 🙂
Sounds romantic and I can feel the tide of emotion!
awesome 🙂