try to fool me

you can try to fool me
fool me not
but maybe at morning
as the day begins to remind me
that day can be night if i let it
or i can move backwards
through time
deceptions as distractions
flowing through my brain
when it believes that maybe chaos does rule the world

try me, try to fool me, maybe once…
and then maybe, i’ll go to the other leftside of the moon later

© r.e.l. 4/1/11

image “blumoon2009”


posted for Poetry Potluck 6/12-6/17/11 for Jingle Poetry

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16 thoughts on “try to fool me

  1. Really enjoyed it, thought the additional 2 end lines after the stream-like, down the page writing, was a wonderful cap. And the pause amplified the effect it had, at least for me anyhow Thanks for sharing:)

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