a strange rain in june
my petal stretching out
when you reached for it
to you that you would
find your way across
to where i am
© r.e.l. 7/3/11
image by simsha
Posted for Poetry Potluck 7/3-7/9/11 on Jingle Poetry
24 thoughts on “your way across”
with your hand open,
immerse in the universe
thank you, as usual franco… i hope you are well.. i look forward to reading more of your poetry.
i especially love the lily pad photo. thanks for visiting…
Find your way across to where I am!
Here are mine:
thank you.. it’s a nice thought huh. thanks for your comments..
thanks for stopping by… much appreciated
This is a lovely piece of poetry
thanks so much, especially the photo 🙂
I love both the poem and the photo awesome!
thank you for your kindness… and yes, that photo by simeon schatz photography is very special..
lovely. so very lovely. 🙂
hope your prayers are answered.
they always are 😉
lovely …..thank you x
glad you enjoyed.. come again
Beautiful poem and I love that photo! Very tender…
thanks and me too!
Excellent! Very visual and deep!
awesome, glad you liked…
this is so very beautiful! love it!
awesome.. thank you, luna