a secret December 7, 2010May 6, 2012 / my secret innuendo on the edge of a secret i fly i can try to close some part of me, but a single laugh will open it as quickly as i shut and a moment can whisper a pathway i want you to know everything i’m an inch from telling you i think of you © r.e.l. 12/7/10 Share this:PocketLinkedInRedditTumblrEmailPrintFacebookTwitterPinterestLike this:Like Loading... Related
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It is amazing
how so little words
can carry such an extension
of crystal love…
yes, agreed. i can spend an entire day and 30 pages worth writing and editing down to a few words.. and then i know it’s perfect. thanks for noticing 🙂
how are you?
I come cross this piece, truly love it.
well done keep it up…
hope to see you in the poets rally or potluck poetry this week, deadline is Wednesday.
thank you.. this one wrote itself.
it’s been great to be a part of your group of poets. i plan to continue.. i will submit by tomorrow. thanks for heads up 🙂
see you soon….
jingle, did you mean by today wednesday? i’m a little confused since you submitted my other poem for this week already. or did you mean to submit this new for week 35 due by next wednesday? i’ll get the hang of this soon! 🙂
What a beautiful write. its so close to my heart…love it 🙂
mine too 🙂
thanks for responding…i’ll check out your blog now ..
I love this, I get this, it’s just wonderful.
yes! me too… 😉
cute and lovely! mine’s here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
cool, i’ll check it out. thanks for your comment
Thanks for linking …
you write well,
keep it up.
thank you, jingle. i appreciate your keeping up with my writing…
your finding me out her in cyberspace means alot. you have a wonderful group of people… 🙂
Few words express such depth. Beautiful write.
yes, lots to be left to the imagination and uniqueness of every reader 🙂
This is glorious…the edge of a secret…and once shared, it’s a secret no more. I loved this!
My potluck: so maybe
Yes, once shared it changes but it was always a secret 🙂
Great short poem packed with all great lines!
thank you…. it wrote itself..
Well crafted poem!
A small suggestion- lose the last line and it sounds even better.
well i thought of that… to make it more mysterious. but then i thought it added some boldness (with a simple powerful statement) to just say it at the end… i like it this way best 😉