you could live there
your heart beating
in my mind
as a trail
to the sun…
…missing life
without you…
…like the times
when the flowers
kiss
the
bees
© r.e.l. 4/1/11
image “flowers kiss”
posted on Luna’s world
Posted for Poetry Potluck 4/3-4/9/11 on Jingle Poetry
my secret innuendo® 
What a sweet thought…
it was for me too…
That was a beautiful poem, it felt “fragile, light” unsure how else to put it, but that is how I felt as I read it, like that poem was a little feather to be held, nice job! 🙂
yes, just like a little feather.. 🙂
nice thought robin and great to see you here on the clambake.. my clambake.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/pease-pudding-hot/
you too 😉 i’ll check it out now
beautiful…
well expressed.
🙂
thanks, jingle.. the photo helped 😉
Lovely.
😉
Such sadness and beauty. A love lost? Lovely poem, also love the way you’ve laid it out, gives the words more importance somehow. 🙂
actually love found… and wanting to spend every moment with it
loved the lines and the arrangekment of words too !
thanks, i agree mixing up the word layout changes it all 😉
I went ahead and posted results for week one a few hours early.
🙂
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/poetry-month-clambake-lets-have-some-fun/
Luna
cool, i still don’t see but will check in again later… thanks again for including me
thanks for the award, and for taking on the effort to put this group together…