as if gathered
© r.e.l. 4/5/11
**published on Micropoetry 2/6/14
**featured in Love Bytes on redbubble
posted for Thursday Poets Rally 4/7-4/13/11 on Promising Poets
67 thoughts on “butterfly”
Ah… the pink voice of a butterfly in the center of our heart, our bones, shining… and we, made of stardust… can say it too. Amazing.
Short and sweet…very nice 🙂
thanks… (and also for the heads up on the link on the site).
thanks, ewan… special to me
How cool! I can feel it…
special and cute.
love the purple color.
my favorite color… couldn’t believe i found this image transparent…
Stardust and butterflies make the world a more beautiful place. Well written.
they sure do 😉
I think you should write greeting cards.
and I hope you dont take that as an insult.
Its just I cant shop for greeting cards ever because I end up crying in the aisle. And I swear, I have the same reaction reading your poems. I know its coming and BOOM!
right in the heart.
love love poems by you, my friend.
how sweet of you… not that i want you to be sad, but i love to create emotion in my writings (and tears are cleansing 😉 thanks for all your support….
so simple yet so beautiful Robin…
the best words are simple… 😉
as butterflies and stars are…
as butterflies and stars are…
short, sweet.. what more can i say? beautiful! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/
thanks… and so are yours 😉
Beautiful, the picture perfectly interacts with the poem…
i thought so too and was blown away by it… 😉
a butterfly in our stomach is hardly ever gathered for us, your verse left me thoughtful, Robin! 🙂
Rally Week 41 – My Poetry
it’s a wonderful feeling to describe.. butterflies are also free, and they have also been transformed
This poem has a beautiful dreamlike quality, and also many readable layers which I love in so few words.
I love the last line, keep up the good work 🙂
thanks … i will 🙂
lovely, and i really like the title. it makes the poem.
awesome… i started with the idea of butterflies in my stomach and went from there…
Lovely, the image, the words, the feeling …
glad you enjoyed…
I really loved this piece. It was simple, delicate and thought provoking. Much enjoyed ~ Rose
sometimes the less the words, the better…
Nicely done! Thank you …
sure, any time… makes me happy to write it too
this was a treat to my eyes
wow! The stardust makes me think of Peter Pan a little bit, which is one of my favorite stories. Captivating words.
special magic in the stars…
i’m post 40
but i have
i found you
through dan’s blog
glad i did
in ur words
& i need some
about right now
i need to
i like ur site
i’ll stop by
from time to time
for a drink
may u always
in the light
wow, thanks for the amazing poem in response….
i love magic. 🙂 come back again…
i just read this reply again… what a sweet response. i hope you visit again as often as you like. it’s my pleasure to create an oasis in cyberspace..
Simple and nicely done!
thank you… simple floating words..
thanks as usual 🙂
Just just just lovely!
I am from ~
thanks, butterflies always are 🙂
A beautiful little poem!
thank you.. short and simple
thanks much 😉
Beautiful! You have a beautiful blog
thank you, april.. .much appreciated. come again 🙂
I love the feeling we describe as buttflies, esp the way you put it
thank you… it is a special feeling… 😉
Umm, are you raelly just giving this info out for nothing?
yes 😉 but if you prefer a greeting card or coffee table book, purchase here http://www.redbubble.com/people/secretinnuendo
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thank you 32 followers of micropoetry society for favoring and retweeting my poem. especially, Lauree Ashcom @LaureeAshcom Feb 6 @pssms “i would star that one over and over again if i could”
you adoration my work invites me to create more. thank you. -robin